turn around your diamante

“read it again?”

“one more time?”

“again?”

“ok. now read it backwards.”

“i hear things differently…yes, he does. shouts to brian keith austin for helping me turn around my diamante (thanks to david bester for bringing in the diamante to our writing workshop last week, i haven’t written one since the sixth grade-thanks to anabel for reading them with me). here’s the before/after, which is really kind of fly:

lover

familiar  body

touching tasting sensual

thoughtlessly taken for granted

absence of presence

warm shell

stranger

stranger

shell warm

presence of absence

granted for taken thoughtlessly

sensual tasting touching

body familiar

lover

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